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Hello Entrepreneur,
My name is Will Moore and I'm an Internet Marketer. When I started Marketing online I failed miserably.
Why?
My Capture page and valued offers stinked. I had an awesome product but I failed to convince my market. Meanwhile my competition (with similar products) grew their bank accounts by leaps and bounds.
Sound familiar?
If you want to know why your website Capture Page isn't converting keep reading.
As you may or may not know your layout design can be the best looking and your product or service can be in high demand but if your content (sometimes called adcopy) isn't up to par then your market will go elsewhere.
The short of it is that you need to focus on your content to be a successful online Entrepreneur. Remember, you have up to 3 seconds keep the attention of a visitor to your website.
Lets walk through the psychology of prospects. On your professional looking Capture Page you want
to write like your having a conversation with the reader, you do not
want them to feel like they are reading from an encyclopedia:
Example: "After working a dead end job for 21 years I was laid off. With a dwindling savings account, 3 kids and 1 on the way I had no other sources of income. I had no choice but to..." Many people can relate to that story and since people love a story your will have them hooked there by overcoming the "3 second rule". I ENCOURAGE YOU TO BE HONEST; DON'T MAKE UP A STORY. There are plenty of people that start an on-line business for the same reasons as you, so don't think you have to have a tear jerker to get results.
When your justifying why your product is the best it is better to use analogies rather than simply stating the fact.
Example: Instead of Gieco saying their product is "simple and easy to follow"; they say its "so easy a Cave Man could do it!"
It's not difficult to draft a Capture Page, Keeping a somewhat clear head while you work is the hardest part. I like to:
You may want to let someone else proof read it (I do this also). Ask them if it conveniences them to signup or buy. If not ask them where on the page did they lose interest, then correct and repeat. You may want to switch proof readers just to get a fresh pair of eyes on it. This step isn't necessary but helpful. Long as well as short adcopy have been known to convert, I suggest you split test both to see what your market responds best to.
Once you've done it a few times you will be able to pump out Capture page content with little to no effort and the steps that I've given you won't seem so long.
If you can write an enticing capture page your on-line profits will only be limited to how many website's and products in different markets you can effectively service and support.This information holds true when writing a sales page or landing page.
The exception is squeeze pages where you need to cut right to the chase after the visitor has been "preped" elsewhere. #3, 4, and 5 would be the steps to follow for a squeeze page.
This information has been tested and is used by me today.
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Best Regards,